Allies - Some Kid

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Instead of the loyal friends that they were intended to be, they turned out to be his worst enemies. They haunted the dark corners of his mind and came out at night when no one was able to see. He eventually freed himself from them, but there was always the bright mirror image that the rest of the world saw. One that looked like his ally, an ally that he had left behind.

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weesin 11 mois, 3 semaines avant
I wouldn't worry about that. Comments are a type of informal writing so I don't believe that proofreading is necessarily required. Quotes, on the other hand, should absolutely be free of errors

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imustbeabigot 11 mois, 3 semaines avant
I accidentally didn't capitalize "Well" in that comment. Nor did I put a comma afterward.
imustbeabigot 11 mois, 3 semaines avant
well I've never had an account and made one for just this comment. It seemed fitting since someone is probably going to think so
weesin 11 mois, 3 semaines avant
well said @imustbeabigot. That's an interesting username...
imustbeabigot 11 mois, 3 semaines avant
Society has started using they/them, which are plural pronouns, to describe singular people and, whether I agree with personal pronoun preference selection or not, this is definitely not within the bounds of "good language." In short, there are a variety of ways to correct this quote.
weesin 11 mois, 3 semaines avant
There are some singular/plural issues here. In the first sentence, it appears as though you're talking about multiple people as you use the word 'they' - yet you use the word 'friend' instead of 'friends' and also 'enemy' instead of 'enemies'. This is confusing to the reader

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